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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 29, 2009 23:52:02 GMT -5
Smokepaw curled up in her nest and fell asleep.
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Post by Honeymilk on Jan 30, 2009 6:34:51 GMT -5
((SMOKEPAW!  I'm not really angry or anything, BUT I told you... Role Play is where YOU are the WRITER. To make your readers interested, try describing your sentences more and stuff. Like... Smokepaw walked into the Apprentices' Den, and fell onto her nest. Closing her eyes, she began to think dreamy thoughts, and soon fell asleep... That would work, too! :I)) |
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 31, 2009 0:22:57 GMT -5
ooc: ok ok.
Bic: Smokepaw saddly walked into the Apprentices' Den, and flopped down into her nest. Closing her eyes, she began to think about the gathering. sleep did not come to her as she thought about the gathering, but when she was so tired she cleared her mind sleep over came her.
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Post by Nightstar on Jan 31, 2009 18:47:38 GMT -5
Much better, X3. Keep up the good work, both of ya. (Honeymilk for your great moderating and Smokepaw for getting pretty good at RPing. ^_^)
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Post by Smokepaw on Feb 3, 2009 5:52:53 GMT -5
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Post by Smokepaw on Feb 3, 2009 5:55:11 GMT -5
Smokepaw awoke and stood up,she streached.she yawned and the padded to the food pile.
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Post by Honeymilk on Feb 18, 2009 10:08:02 GMT -5
((Haha -- good work, Smokepaw! ^^
And Nightstar -- you're a leader for Geez's sake! Use OOC! XD))
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Post by Dustpaw on Mar 7, 2009 15:58:21 GMT -5
Dustpaw had a long tiring day and night. He needed some sleep. Before he went to sleep however, he needed to clean his wound. He started lapping at it and flinched every few licks. After he was finished he padded to the back of the den and picked out a nest there. He curled his tail over his nose and began to sleep.
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Dustpaw was padding through the moorland. He had guessed it was a dream, after all he hadn't woken up yet. He padded along until he saw another cat on the border to ThunderClan. He could barely make out the pelt... but he knew who it was. Ninjapaw. he thought to himself. He padded toward him and when he got close enough he could hear him yowl "Traitor!" and leaped at him with un-sheathed.
Dustpaw awoke with a large leap! His fur fluffed out so he looked twice as big. "Oh... j-just a dream..." he mewed. "Perhaps I should ask Cracklestar if we can start my training yet." he suggested to himself.
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I'm not really angry or anything, BUT
