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Post by shiningpaw on Dec 16, 2008 16:25:12 GMT -5
Shiningpaw blinked his eyes sleepily. He had been dreaming... and it was a realistic dream at that...
The apprentice yawned. I wonder if Largestar is awake yet? he thought. He stood up, stretched, and padded out of the den to go look.
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Post by Nightstar on Dec 16, 2008 17:19:09 GMT -5
I edited it like you asked. First of all, please don't double or triple or whatever number post in a row, unless you have a good reason. If you want to add something, and someone else has not posted with some roleplaying in the same thread, just modify the post. Once someone else has replied, THEN it's good to post again. Keeps spam out and things going more smoothly. Second of all, *yawns* and *pads out of den* isn't the kind of roleplaying we're looking for. We're looking for more of a format like you'd find in the books. Read other peoples' posts for tips is my suggestion. Also, try to make the posts at least two complete sentences if not more. Thanks.  Hope this helped, weasel. |
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Post by shiningpaw on Dec 20, 2008 20:01:03 GMT -5
shiningpaw awakes from a nightmare, as shiningopaw shakes of the chills from the former dream stands up and pads out of the den.
(is that ok nightstar?)
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Post by Nightstar on Dec 21, 2008 13:41:56 GMT -5
Better than it was! Be sure to capitalize if you can, and use proper grammar though. Thanks! |
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Morningpaw
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Post by Morningpaw on Dec 30, 2008 17:27:36 GMT -5
Morningpaw awoke and saw Shiningpaw walking out so he followed him out "hey Shiningpaw"Morningpaw said
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Post by Ninjapaw on Jan 18, 2009 14:53:00 GMT -5
Ninjapaw looked up, then he said "You two up all ready?"
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Post by Nightstar on Jan 19, 2009 10:44:45 GMT -5
Pssst... they're at the ceremony, Ninjapaw.  |
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