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Post by Cracklestar on Dec 31, 2008 17:59:11 GMT -5
Cracklestar wound his way up the hills, to the training area.
He turned and noticed he was alone.
Hmph, he thought, I was sure she was following me. Oh well, she's smart, she'll find her way here.
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 3, 2009 0:52:36 GMT -5
Smokepaw popped out of no where and ran in to Cracklestar knocking him off his feet "Oops sorry" she said sounding worried.
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Post by Cracklestar on Jan 3, 2009 9:51:21 GMT -5
"Haha, that's fine," said Cracklestar. "That'll be usefull during battle. Now, come at me as if I were an enemy. Use any technique you see fit."
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 3, 2009 10:57:27 GMT -5
Smokepaw nodded and jumped up at him on her twolegs making him do the same then she swept under him knocking him off his paws but keeping her paw on the ground "How was that?" she asked turning around to him.
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Post by Cracklestar on Jan 3, 2009 11:49:42 GMT -5
"That was good," said Cracklestar, getting up, Smokepaw still underneath him, "but it's easily countered by this. Cracklestar lay down, putting his full weight onto Smokepaw.
He rolled over, and stood up. "Again. Try something different."
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BTW, Smokepaw, please don't RP out what you think the other character should do. It's called Powerplaying. Every thing a character does is up to the person RPing behind them.
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 3, 2009 13:10:03 GMT -5
how is saying things like that that make more seance PPing? i had to say that for her to trip him.*Sigh* i'm sorry i'll try to make sure it will not happen again.
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Smokepaw rolled over so she was under him and batted at his belly and then rolled away before he got the chance to lay down on her,then she pounced on him digging her claws in to his back pushing him to the ground by her sudden weight,she jumped off him "Better?" she asked.
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Post by Cracklestar on Jan 3, 2009 15:47:00 GMT -5
That's two more examples of powerplaying in that last post -_-
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 3, 2009 21:46:18 GMT -5
so are you saying they PP in the books? i mean they say thing like that in the books to ya know.
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Post by Cracklestar on Jan 4, 2009 8:29:39 GMT -5
-_-
Say Sandstorm shoved Fireheart off his paws
Fireheart is the one who is reacting.
Italic= Sandstorm
Normal= Fireheart
Sandstorm barreled into Fireheart, knocking him off his paws.
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 4, 2009 11:55:56 GMT -5
ok i'll try again
Bic: Smokepaw rolled over so she was under him and batted at his belly and then rolled away before he got the chance to lay down on her,then she pounced on him digging her claws in to his back she jumped off him "Better?" she asked.
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Post by Nightstar on Jan 4, 2009 14:03:35 GMT -5
If I can give my input, I'd say that you're improving, Smokepaw. ^^
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 5, 2009 0:55:12 GMT -5
Thanks! my last last post that Cracklestar did not like the books are like that too in some part right? i mean i have read the books but you made the boar so you know what i mean right?
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Post by Nightstar on Jan 5, 2009 11:00:44 GMT -5
Yeah. If you'd like, I'll show you what parts of your current post were PPing, there was only one bit that I saw, and it was small. Enough that I don't know whether Cracklestar would care or not. Smokepaw rolled over so she was under him and batted at his belly and then rolled away before he got the chance to lay down on her,then she pounced on him digging her claws in to his back she jumped off him "Better?" she asked. Before he got the chance to lay down on her could be considered powerplaying, but in this case, it was just "so he couldn't" in that sense. Good job on fixing everything.  |
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Post by Smokepaw on Jan 5, 2009 12:17:48 GMT -5
but the books say things like that.
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Post by Cracklestar on Jan 5, 2009 15:06:51 GMT -5
ok i'll try again Bic: Smokepaw rolled over so she was under him and batted at his belly and then rolled away before he got the chance to lay down on her,then she pounced on him digging her claws in to his back she jumped off him "Better?" she asked. Well, jumping ofF of Cracklestar before he got a chance to react could be powerplaying, but uhhhhhhhhhh.... I don't really know. Let's roll with that for now BECAUSE DATS JUSS' HOW I RO'! |
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